Honestly for the first episode, I was very entertained. It had a very nice urban feel. Sure I could point out a few things, but the way I see it, it is your style. It was corny but hell dude I was enjoying myself. Keep at it and it will get better over time. And who knows you might come back to this and revise it. Keep it up and keep going! I’ll be following you to watch the next episode. Very dope!